Writing a novel

I’m writing a novel. I’ve been writing it for ages. It’s about a group of homeless people that live underground. They make TV. Leni has lived underground for a while. He’s 17 and a half. Neil has just come to live underground. Leni has been told by the others to give him a tour. Neil thinks Leni is mental. Leni doesn’t think of anything, but he does like TV

Here’s an extract, about 20,000 words in. Please let me know what you think.

it’s under week 9 – novel extract.